The Burn
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© Peter MacDougall, all rights reserved
For the short
story, The Burn, by Dan Rubin in On
Spec.
Much like Making
History, this story is about man's distancing himself from nature.
It too takes place on the West Coast. I wonder if the common theme occurs
because our primary industries here in British Columbia consist of stripping
the land of natural resources and beauty.
In this moment,
Eddo is caught amazed and overwhelmed at the majesty of the acient forest
he is in. Below is an alternate idea which I thought graphically was
better but gave away the ending of the story.